Saturday, February 16, 2019

Birds Punctuate the Days

 Birds Punctuate the Days is written in the form of a haiku and I haven't seen haiku used in this type of way before. It follows the standard format of a haiku but it compiles a bunch of haikus and creates sort of a story with it. To me, it feels as if this poem is trying to show the passage of time but instead of doing it in a conventional manner, it uses birds to convey it. This is only bolstered by the last haiku which says "Period. One Blue egg all summer long. Now gone". I figured the summer has past since the egg finally hatched. Does anyone else feel this way?

1 comment:

  1. Hi William: Good response. I hadn't thought about the last stanza/poem also being a period before. Good observation.

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