Re my draft

As it pertains to the responses I got from within the group critique session regarding the poem that I had for my draft “home is where the heart is,” the responses have helped me to go back to the drawing board to see where I can improve. It was liked, it confused another but brought clarity when I explained it. As someone said, sometimes a poem doesn’t fully make sense, some seems like a mystery, some contain figure of speech that cannot be interpreted literally but possesses a deeper meaning but that does not mean the concept of the poem is not enclosed within it. While I am more than willing to improve myself, I think it will be an ongoing situation where some will like certain materials, some won’t, some will understand and some won’t and this is what is prone to happen in various parts of an individual’s or a set of individuals life. Someone will produce some music and some folks will like and even love it while some; regardless of how good it is some genuinely won’t understand it, some will not like it and it’s a part of reality, it’s a part of life but what is imperative is that we should endeavor to be at the place where we are always willing and open to correction, to learn something new, to grow, to improve/to be a better person than the person you were yesterday.